Line 1: 5 syllables
Line 2: 7 syllables
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Here is a famous tanka written by a Japanese poet from 850 AD named Ono No Komachi.
The colour of the cherry blossom
Has faded in vain
In the long rain
While in idle thoughts
I have spent my life.
Here is Great Blue Heron by Thomas Martin:
I must tell you this bird:
long, thin legs, sharp beak
wading in a dappled stream
grayish blue, at home in Cypress
Curving skyward through Spanish moss.
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Thanks for publishing my heron tanka!!
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