Showing posts with label metaphor. Show all posts
Showing posts with label metaphor. Show all posts

Saturday, 9 May 2015

The Shakespearean Sonnet: A Thing of Beauty

The Shakespearean Sonnet is one of the oldest traditions in English poetry.  Composed of 14 lines this sonnet follows the following rhyming scheme:  ABAB, CDCD, EFEF, GG.  It is written in iambic pentameter:  each line is composed of five feet; each foot is composed of an unstressed followed by a stressed syllable (see http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iambic_pentameter).

It is divided into three quatrains and one couplet.  The first quatrain introduces the main theme or metaphor.  The second quatrain extends the theme or metaphor.  The third quatrain gives the poem an unexpected twist, called peripeteia.  The couplet summarizes the poem; it gives the poem a concluding image (http://www.dummies.com/how-to/content/writing-a-sonnet.html).

One of Shakespeare's most popular sonnets is Sonnet 18:

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.

Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature's changing course, untrimmed.

But they eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
Nor shall death brag thou wanderest in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.





Here is a Shakespearean sonnet I wrote in 2006 about a bridge that Rob and I used to visit in St. Mary's, Ontario, called As I Stand on the Old Train Bridge:

O'er the river Thames the red sun disappears
As I stand on the old train bridge looking down.
I can almost hear the trains of yesteryear
Winding their weary way through the old stone town.

The river carves a path through the fertile ground.
Next to the running water lies a lush plain.
The grass is so green and the trees do abound
Where Jersey cows once grazed beneath passing trains.

Two ducks take a long drink after the soft rain.
As they hide behind a swaying poplar tree.
In the distance grows a field of golden grain
As far away as the naked eye can see.

As I stand on the old train bridge, silence speaks:
And a hush falls over the meandering creak.




Thursday, 19 March 2015

How to Write a How-To Article That Gets Attention

How-to articles, or service pieces, provide the reader with instructions on how to accomplish a task. A common faux pas with how to articles, is presenting the steps in the wrong order, according to Michelle Ruberg in the Writer's Digest Handbook of Magazine Article Writing (http://www.amazon.ca/Writers-Handbook-Magazine-Article-Writing/dp/1582973342).  Use words like when, then, now and next, as you present your instructions.  Write with authority and use the imperative voice ex. "Press the flowers.  Grab the stem."  Summarize your information as the project progresses.

Give the reader a general idea of what the project entails before beginning.  Provide a list of tools and materials that the reader will need for the task.  Use succinct captions underneath photographs. Remember, clarity is of the utmost importance.  Be aware of unstated assumptions on your part.  For instance, one writer was explaining how to press flowers.

"Turn the book sideways and start by placing the flowers in rows, with the stems pointing towards the outside edge.  Gently close the book and place a heavy object on top.  A couple of bricks will do.  It will take up to two weeks for the pressing to be done."

If you followed the writer's advice, you would have to lug bricks to the field and then wait two weeks until the flowers were pressed.  That's where the editing comes in.

Put yourself physically in the picture.  Include appropriate warning when explaining instructions. Define unfamiliar terms and use adjectives and adverbs sparingly.  Sometimes words are not enough: include a diagram or photo when appropriate.

Inject some humour into your article.  One writer who penned a piece for Single Parent Family magazine about the tedious task of clearing your house of clutter, titled her piece "Showdown at the OK Corral", complete with cowboys and tumbleweed.  If you do frame your article around a metaphor, make sure you return to it at the end to tie the piece up nicely.

For more information, visit http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-How-To-Article.














Thursday, 12 March 2015

Don't Judge an Article by its Headline

We've all heard the saying "Don't judge a book by its cover".  And yet we all do it.  An attractive cover immediately catches our eye and pulls us in; an unattractive one turns us off.  The same is true of headlines. We are attracted to captions that are humorous, witty or sensational; we tend to ignore captions that are boring or run of the mill.

The headline is one of the most important parts of a feature article:  it is the first thing the reader sees, it's what the reader recalls, it gives the reader an idea of the article's content, and it gives the writer the best opportunity to market the article.

According to David Aston, here are some ways to write a headline:

1.  Use a how to headline

ex. "How to Tie a Tie in 5 Easy Steps", Esquire (http://www.esquire.com/style/advice/a25665/how-to-tie-a-tie-easy/)

2.  Identify and Solve a Problem

ex.  "To Fall in Love with Anybody, Do This", New York Times
(http://www.nytimes.com/2015/01/11/fashion/modern-love-to-fall-in-love-with-anyone-do-this.html?_r=0)

3.  Make a Statement

ex. "Ambush of Policemen Triggers Manhunt in Racially Tense Ferguson", Reuters (http://www.reuters.com/article/2015/03/12/us-usa-missouri-shooting-protest-idUSKBN0M80CJ20150312)

4.  Strike a Note of Controversy

ex. "Map of Shame;  Do Canadians have access to world class cancer treatments?  Only if you live in the right province", Reader's Digest (http://www.readersdigest.ca/health/healthy-living/map-shame/#GDMdvGCWAxkk1Yfs.97)

5.  Pose a Question

ex. "What's Wrong with the Blurred Lines Copyright Ruling?", New York Times http://www.nytimes.com/2015/03/12/arts/music/whats-wrong-with-the-blurred-lines-copyright-ruling.html?nl=todaysheadlines&emc=edit_th_20150312

6.  Offer an Explanation

ex. "Help from the Hit Man:  Music producer David Foster does more than make gold records; he fosters a charitable organization dear to many Canadians' hearts", Reader's Digest

7.  Use intrigue

ex. "Merchant of Murder:  Civil Servant Rick Mofina Kills people -- in his mind, as a crime fiction writer", Reader's Digest

8.  Finality (ultimate, best, only)

ex. The 25 Best Diet Tips of All Time, Prevention (http://www.prevention.com/weight-loss/diets/25-best-weight-loss-tips-ever)

9.  make it unusual

ex. "Wall Street Lays Egg", Variety, Black Monday, 1929
(http://fineartamerica.com/featured/wall-street-lays-an-egg-famous-everett.html)

10.  make it sensationalistic

ex. "Headless Body in Topless Bar", New York Post (http://nypost.com/2010/02/22/83-killer-in-denial/)

11.  use a simile or metaphor

ex. "Coffee So Fresh You'll Want to Slap It", Reader's Digest

12.  refer to an historic event

ex. "Gold Rush:  Can Canadian Olympic Athletes Hope to Score Some Heavy Metal?", Reader's Digest (http://www.readersdigest.ca/travel/world/10-greatest-summer-olympic-games#5hPQ00BD17SjgZLx.97)